i think it's pretty cool! the mix sounds kind of muddy, though. maybe there needs to be more high end frequencies as it seems very mid-low end range throughout the song. the beat itself sounds really nice, though! :))
i think it's pretty cool! the mix sounds kind of muddy, though. maybe there needs to be more high end frequencies as it seems very mid-low end range throughout the song. the beat itself sounds really nice, though! :))
thanks!
i really think the main problem with this isn't the vocals per se but just the... intonation of them. some of the pitches with the sung "chords" make you cringe, and when there are two voices at once (which might be a little too stereo separated for my taste), they are too different to make it as enjoyable as possible. lastly, i don't think that the vocals are mixed well with the instrumental, which i really like, actually.
other than that no real complaints.
Thank you for your input.
EDIT: This song is mixed as it is because of the low amount of equipment and software available at the time. If I could make one wish regarding this song, it would be that people ignore the quality and the minor things, and listen to the words.
It was originally written on my birthday. "Ohhh can you save me" used to be "Ohhh happy birthday" actually, but we deemed THAT too cringe and I rewrote it.
If you couldn't enjoy it, I hope that future peoples can, thanks to this exchange.
it might just be my personal opinion, but some of the notes and rhythms sound very... off. the instruments all sound great, but some of the, i'd say almost experimental, rhythms and passing notes could use some fine-tuning. als, it's quite chaotic. if the instruments faded in and out as they played and if some of the volumes were reduced i think this would make for a more pleasant listening experience. otherwise, it's decent. :)
You are absolutely and 10000% correct. No personal opinions here, they are all valid and objective criticisms. There is much more to be said, but these are definitely the core issues at hand.
very jazzy i love
love all the instruments, but the bass is my favorite! the predrops are really cool. it's exciting to listen to. a little more variation during the drop would make this perfect.
i love the chill atmosphere this gives off! something i will say i noticed is that during the drop, i could hear some distortion. maybe reducing the highs or mids in mastering might help. i really like the song overall though!
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i really like the ambiance and the drums! i think the calmer parts really pull this piece off together. you always have a great way of using instruments and making them sound great!!!
drops are pretty cool! some of the basses are a little "eh" but most of them are pretty good!